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Closing in on 40,000 words…

I am getting close to the half-way point for my rough draft of 13 Treasures of Britain. I should reach 40,000 words this weekend.

I’m freaking out a little bit that my deadline is December 30 and I’m still not half-way done, but I am also strangely confident.

On the other hand… I have a sinking feeling that I’m suffering from a “main character problem.” To be specific, I’m afraid that I have a flat main character whom the audience won’t care about. My challenge is to find a way to get the audience to care about my Merlin character. Is the “save the cat” thing played out, or do writers still do that?

In a lot of ways, I’ve imagined my version of Merlin to be like a mixture of the Peter Capaldi and Christopher Eccleston versions of Doctor Who. But the first half of the book is mostly Merlin-collecting-things and doing crazy stuff (think: the first half of a Doctor Who episode, where the Doctor travels to another planet and encounters some treacherous situation). In a typical episode of Doctor Who, the emotional stuff usually builds in the second half, particularly when we find out there’s more to the adventure than the Doctor originally thought.

My problem is that I’m not writing an episode of television; I’m writing a novel. So for 40,000 words (100+ pages), the emotional stuff hasn’t come into play yet. It will happen in the second half of the book, but will the audience lose interest before that?

I can already foresee a ton of editing and revision once I’m finished with the rough draft. Which is actually exciting. I’m a weird person in that I LIKE revising. I’ve just got to keep the “inner editor” at bay for a few weeks more while I finish the rough draft.

NaNo 2014: Week #4 Recap

Here it is. The last day of NaNoWriMo 2014. And….

I didn’t reach my word count goal. I didn’t even come close, really. My goal was 50,000 words. As of this moment, I’m at 35,006 words. Not too bad, but not where I wanted to be.

In past years of NaNoing, I used the Thanksgiving holiday to get a huge chunk of words written. This year, I wrote less this Thanksgiving weekend than I did in each of the previous three weekends. Having a husband and infant child means that holidays are spent watching the kids, conversing with family, and traveling. In years past, I didn’t have these responsibilities, so it was no big deal to sneak off after dinner and write for three hours. This year… not so much.

So alas! I really thought I could hit 50K this year. I still have plenty of time to reach 80,000 words by December 30, so I’m not panicking yet. But it would’ve been nice to only have 30,000 more words to go than 45,000 words.

I will say that this year’s NaNo was a success for me in terms of my discipline as a writer. I managed to write every day (except Thanksgiving, and that’s a national holiday, so I don’t feel too bad). Writing every day was my personal goal for NaNo 2014, and in that sense, I “won” NaNo.

I’ve also learned a few things about my habits and preferences as a writer:

1. I’m actually a morning writer. This surprised me because I’ve always been such a night owl in the past. But now I find that if I can get 1,000 words written in the morning, my day goes much better and I spend the rest of the day thinking about the story and getting ideas. I still end up writing a little in the afternoon or evening, but the morning is where my fingers really get flying.

2. I NEED to write every day to keep my imagination flowing. Even one day off breaks the momentum and messes with my flow. As Kerouac said, “Write while the heat is in you.” I’ve got to write every day to keep the fire stoked and burning hot.

3. I need to read on a regular basis. Reading also stokes my creative fires, and I need the stimuli of other people’s stories to keep my own story going. I haven’t done much reading for pleasure since becoming a teacher because so much of my time is devoted to reading for class or grading papers. I have made a concerted effort to read for pleasure this month and I think it’s really inspired me with my own writing.

4. I need to jump around in the story and not write linearly. I found myself getting stuck earlier this month when I came to a part of my story and didn’t know where to take it. This caused several wasted hours “thinking” instead of writing. Once I started jumping around and writing whichever part of the story I was most interested in at the moment, I found that my writing time was actually spent WRITING and not sitting around waiting for inspiration.

5. I need to do other types of writing beyond just working on the novel. Doing these blog posts (and also blogging elsewhere with some of my students who are doing NaNo) has helped give my mind a rest, particularly when I’ve had to plow through some rocky patches in the novel. Blog writing is easier, and it’s not really “creative” in the same sense as fiction writing is. But it’s still writing, and it’s a nice way to keep my fingers moving and words flowing. Sometimes I need that warm-up (or cool-down); it’s almost like stretching before and after a run.

As a final note on NaNo 2014, I’m always amazed with how NaNo helps me stay focused and gives me a purpose. No one needs a “contest” like NaNo to write a novel, but for some reason, these 30 days are so special. Somehow, the month of November has a magical quality; it lights a fire under us and keeps us honest. 50,000 words or not, I’m proud of what I’ve done this month.

The Need to Write Everyday

I didn’t write on Thursday due to the holiday (Thanksgiving). This would seem like a minor hiccup, but alas, as I try to get back into my novel today, I’m struggling. I can’t seem to remember any of the story thread; I can’t find my way back into the story world. It all seems so foreign — the characters, the settings, the conflicts, the language. How can one missed day throw me out of my story so completely?

I managed to write about 1,000 words tonight, but they were disjointed and came in fits and starts. Hopefully tomorrow goes more smoothly.

What’s so crazy is that I feel so much more alive today now that I’ve written. My brain is abuzz with ideas; my imagination seems more alert and spongy (waiting to soak up ideas, I guess). I felt sluggish yesterday, and not just because of all the food. I was sluggish because I hadn’t connected with my story or my characters. It’s like, I *need* them now.

Which is totally cool! I’m glad that my story is becoming part of my daily routine. If nothing else comes out of NaNo, the desire and the discipline to write everyday is a good result.

NaNo 2014: Week #3 Recap

I started off really strong at the beginning of Week #3. The weekends are so nice because I can sleep in a bit, but still wake up and get some writing done before Red Beard (my husband) and the Noodle (my baby) are awake. My weekend word counts were great.

The weekdays for Week #3 have been less nice; I’ve been busy at work and wasn’t able to meet my word count goals. I’ve discovered (to my surprise) that I am a “morning writer” and can get a lot of words done before lunch. However, I’m not a “super-early morning writer,” which means that I can’t write in the morning on days when I work. I am a teacher, so if I wanted to get up a couple hours earlier to write before work, I’d be getting up at 4 a.m. There is basically no way on earth for me to wake up at 4 a.m. and be functional enough to write words. It doesn’t matter how early I go to bed; that just ain’t happening.

So I need to find a strategy that will help me get more words written on the weekdays, but that will also allow me to get my daily duties done too (grading papers, responding to parent/teacher emails, taking care of Noodle, cooking dinner, doing laundry, etc.).

Maybe I”ll discover the secret during Week #4.

NaNo 2014: Week #2 Recap

Didn’t reach my word count goals for this week. It’s been particularly difficult to get “in the flow” so my writing has been in stops and starts and I can only punch out a few hundred words a day. I hate to blame my adorable five-month old daughter, The Noodle, but she’s not a great napper, so I can only get 30 minutes of uninterrupted writing time when she naps (and she either naps twice or three times a day, maybe).

The trouble is that sometimes those 30 minutes have to be devoted to grading papers and lesson planning.

So my progress this week has not been great. However, I’ve managed to do some more outlining, so at least I have a better idea of how I want the second half of the novel to go.

One of my ideas: Merlin must rely on Morgana to help him fight the big bad because he’s lost his powers. I’ll see how it goes…

NaNo 2014: Week #1 Recap

In order to finish the rough draft of my novel by December 30, I’m doing NaNoWriMo this year. I’ve done NaNo in the past (I won the challenge in 2009 and wrote a fabulously bad novel), so this experience is not new to me. But what *is* new this year is that I’m using NaNo as a way to complete the rough draft of a novel I plan to publish. So the pressure is on to write 50,000 words this month, more so than in past years of NaNo.

My first week has not been spectacular. I’ve found it hard to write after a long day at work, or the baby has demanded my attention for most of the day and I can only write for the 45 minutes she manages to nap. Or I’ve had to grade papers (day job = teacher).

I’m up to 7,806 words, which is almost double what I had written for the novel before November 1st (current total word count for the novel: 15,750).  So in a sense, NaNo has already helped me increase my productivity. So that’s good.

But I’m also finding out that I am not a fast writer. I have moments where I get going and the words come faster, but for the most part, I just do not come up with ideas, words, lines of dialogue, descriptions, or plot developments fast enough.

This past weekend I tried a new strategy to see if I could get my word count up: Using the “Writercopter” (Courtesy of Hillary Rettig)

And so far, it has been helpful. I am not a writer who outlines her story (i.e.: a “planner,” as many in the NaNo community call it), but I do sketch out the basic structure of my story by figuring out what should happen in each chapter (and this is all very sketchy and rough; ex.: “Ch. 8, Merlin uses some kind of spell to find the Nomad [she is wandering on a distant planet]; she uses the whetstone to sharpen her sword and defeat the spirit creature that has stalked her”). So the Writercopter method works for me because I can skip from chapter to chapter whenever the mood strikes me, or I get an inspiration for a particular part of the story. Yesterday, when I was struggling with Chapter 6, I skipped ahead to Chapter 7 and then even did a little bit with Chapter 12.

Unfortunately, even this method hasn’t increased my word count by all that much. My new goal is 2,000 words per day. This should get me over the 50,000 hump. But so far today, I’ve written 46 words (and I just wrote them two minutes ago so I could claim to have written something before posting this blog).

The only thing that gives me comfort at this point is that my average per day is 780 words — which is more than the 350 George R.R. Martin supposedly writes each day.

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